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Biographical
precis: how do I write one? (text)
Format
The following items show the format of the Biographical precis in the
barest form. Compare the form to the examples provided to see how information
is made to fill out the format. This is a rather rigid format, but you
must be flexible enough to make it adapt to the situations of your intended
subject. For instance, some notable philosophers (e.g. Socrates and Jesus)
did not write anything at all. So sentence 2 will be difficult to satisfy.
Instead, one must note what writing about that person provides us with
the historical record.
Items 1 and 3 (a,b,c) are interdependent. In the first sentence, the
major fields of influence are noted. Some people are important in one
area, others in several. Each area of significant influence must be explained,
so the sentence(s) in 3 (a,b,c) expand to accommodate the fields noted
in sentence one. Linus Pauling, for instance, won the Nobel Prize in chemistry
for his work on the chemical bond, and later the Nobel Peace Prize for
his work to establish an international nuclear test ban treaty. Those
are clearly two important and distinct areas of accomplishment. In a biographical
precis on Pauling, we would note both honors in sentence 1, then each
in turn in sentence 3a and 3b.
In the second sentence, the task is to list the individual's significant
works. The first type of work to come to mind is the book. But many important
people produced value by other means than writing. Actors, explorers,
political figures, and an endless variety of others, have influences on
the world by many means. The means of action, is what is meant here by
the work. You will find that most (but not all) philosophers
operate by writing. Some adventurous contemporaries philosophers are even
having impact by creating websites :)
A rhetorically accurate verb is an action word that
describes what kind of action the individual performed that created their
influence. Here are some examples of rhetorically accurate verbs in use.
Ayn Rand championed
radical capitalism
Douglas Engelbart invented
the computer mouse
Galileodiscovered
sunspots
Mohammad founded
Islam
Salk cured
smallpox
Jimi Hendrix redefined
the electric guitar
Please note that the descriptions are minimal here and not exemplary of
what should be in a biographical precis. See the examples provided for
fuller clarification.
| 1. |
[Name]of
the person, [life span (birth-death in parenthesis)], is/was a [geographical
identifier] [major field identifier] who is known for her/his contributions
to [field a] and [field
b] and [field c] and [field d]. |
| 2. |
[Name]’s
major works are: (title i), (title ii), (title
iii), and ...continued if needed to (title iv). |
| 3. |
a. |
In [field
a], s/he [rhetorically accurate verb] [a succinct expression
of what the person did in that field]. |
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b. |
In [field
b], s/he [rhetorically accurate verb] [a succinct expression
of what the person did in that field]. |
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c. |
In [field
c], s/he [rhetorically accurate verb] [a succinct expression
of what the person did in that field]. |
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d. |
In
[field d], s/he [rhetorically accurate verb] [a
succinct expression of what the person did in that field]. |
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When [Name] writes
[a quote (or summary statement) identifying an aspect of the person’s
thought/life/work] I [rhetorically accurate verb] a statement of
the aspect of your thought/life that is so related. |
| 5. |
What I want to
know about [Name] is [a statement of one point
that you want to know more about or feel that you could gain a
better understanding of]. |
| 6. |
References: use
standard bibliography style (APA or MLA) to reference your sources.
Use multiple sources, compare them, and reference all that you
use (i.e. get information from, not just look at).
Book:
McFeely, William S. 1991. Frederick Douglass. New York: W.W. Norton
Company. Inc.
Webpage:
Hypatia of Alexandria. 1999. The MacTutor History of Mathematics
archive. http://www-gap.dcs.st-and.ac.uk/~history/Mathematicians/Hypatia.html.
Retrieved from the World Wide Web, August 17, 2002. |
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